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My teacher asked us to write a poem. He didn't asked it was a requirement. : )

So I thought i would like to shared it here. Hope you all enjoy it.

On a foggy night where the moon lit bright

Led by an unknown force to its river

Hid and free from all greedy seekers sight

Onto its bank I step and felt a shiver

Blind or trap I fell on the moisten ground

My hands land above the thorny bush and bleed

In the far distance I hear music sound

Sweet and luring but the mind tells to flee

Magically spell bound by the playing sound

I pass through the veil leaving this plane

Do weep, not of my lost but to what I found

Not the fearful rumors human complain

It is the great compassion these beings held

Once sight, the eye shall fail to serve as a shell

You know, I was thinking maybe we can make a little game.

Like someone start a poem and another person tried to understand the poem and then would respond to the poem with another poem(I think it's better if we make it short poem. You wouldn't want the whole things to turn your direction. We want to see where it turns when we putted a little of our words into it. How much can we effect).

Example:

I wrote my poem up there.

Somone wrote back on the topic (of course quote what the person before you said):

She was gone for good never to return

Not chain nor threaten but by great will she made her choice

forever shall she be away from this plane of the greed and violence of human beings.

maybe i or someone else would reply:

To why must she be away?

Her own fear of her role drove her away

She had chose to be given as an offspring of the earth

Why must she regret her choice?

She had not. She just had not known

So, if people agree to it why don't we tried it out? We can put in characters take out characters, but tried to do one things. Like i did, I said that she did not intend to return and then I would later reply with expressing her fear. It does not matter if we did not understand the poem the way the person is trying to express, because that's how things are, aren't they? respond on how you understand it but first still do tried to understand it.

My goal in this is to show or at least tired to see how a person thinking and understanding would change or effect the outcome of something. I don't exactly know what i want, but the idea came just when i decide to share this poem.I hope that as you read this, you would understand my point and my interest in trying this out.

So if people agree and like this game, we can try it. I hope you all would agree to play it and would respond, challenging your mind a bit. :  ) And i hope you all understand my poems as well. (of course, if the game is play then the next person to reply to my poem could make the being whatever they want because i left out stating what these beings are. As you all know i didn't say they were fairies although i did describe it enough so the person  may get the image of fae) (How many ET/beings out there that we know play lovely music?-fairies; i said lovely but i have never listen to them play before; i wouldn't want to if listening to their music mean getting up and dance till you're half-dead. That was what, was wrote in books, isn't it?)